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anatomy practice by PakaFaceInSpace anatomy practice by PakaFaceInSpace
this sucks.
I need a redline.
Someone who knows cat anatomy very well, please redline.
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:iconkitkatqt:
KitKatQT Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i'll reline if you want me too
im not best either but i guess i do know some thing xD?
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PakaFaceInSpace Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
okay xD
I really only need it on the neck and up.
I think I'm doing fine on back legs |3
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KitKatQT Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
okayyy ouo
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PakaFaceInSpace Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
^ w^
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AikawiiFrostie Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Too leany forward.

So hey gurl, I am writing a story. Rough draft excerpt is on my page, wanna read and possibly give critique?

*Is desperately lonely and just wants some acknowledgment
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PakaFaceInSpace Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I noticed |3

Of course. I'll try to give it one, may not be the best but... >w>.... I'll try
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AikawiiFrostie Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Thankies.
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PakaFaceInSpace Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
can I have a link to what you wanted me to see?
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AikawiiFrostie Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
It's on my page.
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PakaFaceInSpace Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I have to say, that was actually pretty good.
You had good word choice and everything. (sorry, this might be a short critique since there wasn't much that I can talk about)
There are a few things that I would change, like when you were describing yourself.
Try going into more detail with it, it makes the readers able to imagine it better.
I noticed you used the word 'and' a lot. Try just using commas in a few areas if it makes sense.
Other than that, this is pretty good.

I hope this helps >w>'
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