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 .:Cityscape:.by *giingaComments TTTHANNNKKS BRO FOR DA CRITIQUES! YOU GONNA IMPROOVE MEE SHOOO MUCH!!! >u<
BIGGG HEAD FTW MANNN! AND YEAA I KNOW THE EYES LOOK WEEIRD, I SAW THEM LIKE THAT TOO. AND WANTED TO FIX, BUT LAZYYY! BUT THANKS ANYWAYS! YOU MY MOTHER TELL ME MOAR!   YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAwAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!1!
YO' WELCOME, SUN!!1! I WILL CONTINUE TO CRITIQUE THINGS YOU WANT ME TO CRITIQUE. |
Sta.sh
CRITIQUE TIME
DON'T MIND THE STARS
I HAVE A BAD TIME WITH USING STARS -puts random stars-
OKAY
SO
THE PICTURE LOOKS GOOD, BUT THE HEAD SEEMS A BIT OUT OF PLACE, IDK HOW TO LIKE.. FIX THAT, BUT JUST POINTING IT OUT (JEEZ PAKA IS SO BAD AT CRITIQUES)
THE EYES SEEM A BIT TOO CLOSE TOGETHER
AND FOR SHADING, THE SHADING IS EXCELLENT, BUT YOU SHOULD USE A LIGHT SOURCE SOMEWHERE. MAYBE SINCE THE LIGHT IS COMING FROM THE MOON, OR BEHIND FROM RIKO, TRY TO HAVE THE LIGHT SHADING COME FROM BEHIND HIM.
BUT OVERALL THIS IS A CUTE AND VERY WELL DONE PICTURE.
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK
kthxbai